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wolf blade (my own anthro comic)
Sun Apr 16, 2006, 11:49 PM
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wolf blade (my own anthro comic)
a comic series im doing...

well, i dunno wether you'll be interested or wether it will catch your eye...but take a look at it...

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/31812828/

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Mon Apr 17, 2006, 04:25 PM (This post was last modified: Mon Apr 17, 2006 04:26 PM by SWATwolf.)
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RE: wolf blade (my own anthro comic)
not bad~ but there too much column in a page
this will eventually make the reader confuse.

keep up the good work! Winking

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Tue Apr 18, 2006, 11:01 PM
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RE: wolf blade (my own anthro comic)
Actually the number of columns doesn't make it confusing at all. Since the rows are clearly defined, I find it simple and easy to progress through. You should try reading some of those ... "abstract" comics out there >_<

I like the smooth flow of the story, the coreography of scenes and find it quite surprising how well you can draw hands/paws for a beginner ^^

Hope you keep this comic going. Its at quite a cliffhanger there XD
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Wed Apr 19, 2006, 05:05 PM
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RE: wolf blade (my own anthro comic)
Canis Enigmas Wrote:Actually the number of columns doesn't make it confusing at all. Since the rows are clearly defined, I find it simple and easy to progress through. You should try reading some of those ... "abstract" comics out there >_<

I like the smooth flow of the story, the coreography of scenes and find it quite surprising how well you can draw hands/paws for a beginner ^^

Hope you keep this comic going. Its at quite a cliffhanger there XD

in fact, im continuing it!

here is page 2! ^^

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Tue Apr 25, 2006, 06:59 PM
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RE: wolf blade (my own anthro comic)
Nicely done! Though it fits the normal anime/manga style of storyline. Its a good effort Winking I can see that you've already familiar with most common line effects manga artists use to express motion and sudden action.

And from one cliffhanger to another. Any chance of continuing the story? XD
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Tue Apr 25, 2006, 09:16 PM
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RE: wolf blade (my own anthro comic)
lol... my only beef with it is the storyline. But i'm guess that's what greywolfX is after so... nevermind.

Quick note: if he did attack that fast, there would not be much blood on the blade. But i guess it's a manga thing.
Like in anime, how when somebody gets shot, we always get a great view of a glob of blood that splatters on the floor/wall/etc. Which is total bullsh*t, because if you were to get shot, the velocity of the bullet would cause the blood to spray. The size of the blood drops indicate the weapon used - a baseball bat or golf club would give a "splatter" (because you can only swing one so fast...).

<-- has watched too much CSI and read "Henry C. Lee's Crime Scene Investigation Handbook" one too many times.

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Wed Apr 26, 2006, 10:13 PM
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RE: wolf blade (my own anthro comic)
Canis Enigmas Wrote:Nicely done! Though it fits the normal anime/manga style of storyline. Its a good effort Winking I can see that you've already familiar with most common line effects manga artists use to express motion and sudden action.

And from one cliffhanger to another. Any chance of continuing the story? XD

yesh! you can catch all at my DA website! http://www.boltalchemist.deviantart.com/

page 3 is out too! i plan to put this story into volumes

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/32309318/

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